Write a letter to your local council complaining that the street where you live has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:
· why it is happening
· what problems it could cause
· what your suggestions are.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Ell Green, a resident of 25 Woodside Street. I am writing to apprise you with the sorry state of our street on behalf of all the residents of this area.
The main problem we are facing from the past few weeks is that the rubbish collection van does not come regularly. Due to that, the litter is heavily deposited on the roadside, especially near the park. After two days, it produces bad smell that one cannot pass through that road. In addition to this, the garbage scattered around attracts insects. Last but not least, in the windy atmosphere, the garbage disperses on the entire lane and makes the whole colony look untidy.
I must tell you that the children playing in the park are most vulnerable to catch contagious diseases from the flies and the mosquitos flying around the litter. I have also noticed the frequent burning of the litter by some people to get rid of the trash and the smoke emitted from that could cause respiratory problems and degrade the quality of the fresh air.
To address this problem, I would like to suggest that rubbish should be collected daily or at least on alternate days to prevent the accumulation of trash. I hope that the responsible environmental officer like you would certainly implement stern rules to avoid the problems of this kind in the future.
I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85020242915 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48608710377 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651821862348 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5756367732 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1538461538 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145149400931 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466487300267 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419134985777 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698460736648 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305206810704 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.