Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge about how children should be taught. The discussion about whether the kids should compete or co-operate is a debatable topic and people all around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts the majority view of people and remains a hot topic among people of concern. In this essay, I shall scrutinize my opinion by providing examples and explanation before drawing a opinion.
At the outset, there are many arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one lies in the fact that people who co-operate become more helpful adults. The most impeccable example that could be provided here is a study made by Harvard University that suggests that young people who are taught to co-operate can work 50% more efficiently in groups. Hence, I substantiate that cooperation plays a vital role on children's life.
Those who disagree with these ideas might have a cogent notion and could assert that competition can discourage kids to help other people. The most pertinent example that could be given is a study that states that children who only compete in their childhood grow without the spirit of helping people.
To conclude, after taking the above-stated points into consideration, I strongly believe that cooperation is prominent and should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13901345291 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72647215007 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614349775785 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0521608079 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 7.25397266985 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311334287867 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101083631998 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543797848822 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159739633052 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598549509361 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.