It is commonly observed that being intelligent is the only way to be successful, however, many believes that there are also other factors that contribute in the success. In my view, hard work is the key to success and it is immense important and the responsibility of every individual to give their best. In this essay, I will discuss both views followed by a reasoned conclusion.
First and foremost, history has witnessed many successful renowned personalities who were intelligent. They had utilised their intelligence in their accomplishments. Moreover, a recent survey has revealed that intelligence and success are directly proportional to each other that means, the more intelligent you are the more successful you will be. For instance, Bill gates and Steve Jobs are the founder of Microsoft and Apple respectively. They are well-known by their intelligence and led the top riches people in the world for serveral years.
On the contrary, it is a truth that people with less intelligence are more successful in our today society. There are many politicians and businessmen who received the wealth and name from their predecessors and ancestors, they were lucky rather than intelligent. In addition, working hard with consistency also ensure achieving the impossible, as an example, prime minister of Pakistan Mr. Imran Khan was able to built several cancer hospitals and become the most ever respectable leader of the country after struggling and working hard tirelessly for more than 26 years.
In conclusion, it is always not possible to be intelligent but quite possible to be a hard-worker. Be passionate in achieving your dreams and keep moving on, success will be a victory if you have achieved it by your own will and efforts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...successful, however, many believes that there are also other factors that contribute in the success....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.5418719212 218% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18727915194 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04794437515 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1557329172 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245685714008 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866119289499 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761031205805 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148328807464 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622599437023 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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