Some people think traditional cultures should be strictly followed, while others think modern people should adopt a new way of life. What is your opinion?
These days the question about the necessity to strictly keep and follow traditional culture versus adopting a new way of life has become a subject of considerable controversy. The majority of people all around the world has split into two concurrent camps regarding this question. But do people certainly have to choose between these two options or is there another complementary choice? This essay will discuss both opinions and show that humanity can find a compromise in collaboration of traditional culture with modern lifestyles.
Of course, traditional culture remains a very important part of cultural identity in every country. The well-known proverb says that the one who forgets own roots don't have a future. In other words it means that people always develops things based on some foundation likewise a building. With no foundation the building will fall apart. Same as the modern lifestyle without the foundation of the traditional culture will likely create a cultureless society.
On the contrary, the modern lifestyle tends to become more attractive for younger generations. And it is fully understandable due to the steadily developing technologies which in turn affect all the areas of humankind including culture. Needless to say that progress can't be stopped. And consequently it's impossible to stop the worldwide trend of cultural transformation. People just have to accept this factor as inevitable and adopt traditional culture accordingly in order to prevent full vanishing of the latter. For instance, many modern musicians and composers have already started integrating traditional musical elements of their people's culture into the most modern musical genres which produces popular and attractive works adored by different generations.
In conclusion, considering that both traditional culture and modern lifestyle produce significant influence on the peoples' lives I believe that the most beneficial option would be to seek for a collaboration between them by integrating traditional culture elements into the modern ways of life. This will allow people to preserve cultural traditions in a rapidly developing world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...says that the one who forgets own roots dont have a future. In other words it means ...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fall apart. Same as the modern lifestyle without the foundation of the traditiona...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... culture. Needless to say that progress cant be stopped. And consequently its imposs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, if, likewise, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1207.87684729 151% => OK
No of words: 327.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58409785933 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02032629347 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 379.143842365 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9911291607 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293185521913 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850697605789 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650694190201 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185408681018 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459726658541 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...says that the one who forgets own roots dont have a future. In other words it means ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fall apart. Same as the modern lifestyle without the foundation of the traditiona...
^^
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... culture. Needless to say that progress cant be stopped. And consequently its imposs...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, if, likewise, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1207.87684729 151% => OK
No of words: 327.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58409785933 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02032629347 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 379.143842365 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9911291607 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293185521913 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850697605789 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650694190201 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185408681018 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459726658541 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.