Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most striking trend in the today's world is the colossal upsurge that the number of people believe that women should join the army, and navy. There is widespread worry that, this will lead a myriad concerns about the one's life. However I do not entirely accept this, I will discuss why in the given essay.
There are number of arguments in the favour of stance. But the most important is the women should be allowed to join the army and navy jobs just like the men. We are living in the independant nation, everyone has a right to do any job. Women are much stronger than the men, they achieve the higher rank in the studies as well as sports. Womens also serve the nation in very good manner. If the women have a capablity to pass the fitness and medical test as well as interview test, then governments have no problems for giving them jobs in army and navy.
On the other hand, Women is the main member of the house. She has a lots of responsiblities like cooking food, cleaning, take care of the kids and so on. So it is very hard for the women to manage the both the responsibilty in the proper way. That is the main reason, that the some people are not in the favour of women to do public services like army and navy.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benifits of working in the army by the women is indeed to great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... a myriad concerns about the ones life. However I do not entirely accept this, I will d...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...s the main member of the house. She has a lots of responsiblities like cooking food, c...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... way. That is the main reason, that the some people are not in the favour of women t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26717557252 5.00649968141 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17582695713 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7662750025 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8571428571 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244505510942 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778283390382 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996529191479 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120049684794 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595396774359 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 12.6369458128 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.5310837438 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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