Some senior people prefer to live in retirement communities with other old people rather then their adult children. what are the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon?
there is a widespread concern about the argument that retirement communities are a better place for some seniors to live. this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the above statement with the notion that "seniors prefer to live with old people" using practical approach.
At the outset, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. The most significant one related to the retirement communities includes not only the betterment of society but also the growth of every individual on the planet. Furthermore, individuals can not only attain greater success and effectiveness but can also enhance their productivity, efficiency and excel in their fields. Moreover, the other important factors supported by the retiremnet are independant life style of adults, freedom from responsibilities and less time consumption.
there are several other factors that shows the benefits of retirement communities because people of same age mostly have alike thoughts and that's why there are less disputes and they are free from any kind of responsibility. that's why it is preferable to live in retirement communities for seniors to enjoy the freedom of life and company of friends.
To conclude, from my perspective, the government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of this phenomenon. people are encouraged to adhere to applicable rules and regulations related to retirment communities for seniors to bring prosperity, efficiency, productivityand positive development in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69198312236 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2421925553 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5260159418 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32638449818 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107614692843 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085350253788 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185668965073 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104597193335 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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