Someone speaks but don't follow it in reality. Society accepts people with action not on basis of spoken words
Society accepts people with action not on basis of spoken words. I completely agree the statement. In this essay I am going to explain the supporting points for the agreed statement.
Firstly, society always will judge the people according to their action. They always check the people with their statement whether they are following it or not. For example, Prophet Mohammed became very famous in his country and also all over the world because of his actions. He always used to do, what he said.
Secondly, society don't accept the people those who only speak, but they don't do. They think that they are liar. These people used to give only advice to others. But actually they don't follow it in real life.
To conclude this, it is always easy for everyone to advice others. Before advising anyone, we need to think once, is it possible for me to follow it in real life. Likewise we can avoid the bad name in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'judge'.
Suggestion: will always judge
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
...e people those who only speak, but they dont do. They think that they are liar. Thes...
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Suggestion: don't
...nly advice to others. But actually they dont follow it in real life. To conclude t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...sible for me to follow it in real life. Likewise we can avoid the bad name in the societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 1207.87684729 63% => OK
No of words: 164.0 242.827586207 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15191211681 2.71678728327 79% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 139.433497537 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 379.143842365 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6481360805 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.2857142857 104.977214359 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 20.9669160288 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218661611259 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796468027773 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133645254143 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127657477772 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745661831882 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 12.6369458128 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 53.1260098522 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.39 11.5310837438 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 55.0591133005 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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