Study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today? To what extent do you agree with it? Support your opinion with examples.
Nowadays, There have a heat discussion on the time, peace and comfort consumption in study and employment should be combined or whether one distracts another. and it attracts numerous controversies and draws the attention of the public , some people believe that the study need much time, peace and comfort place to make them concentrate on what they study. while others think they can study after work or make time for study at their workplace. From my point of view, I agree to the study need the dedicate time and space to provide the environment for us to concentrate on and makes the study more fast and efficient.
First and foremost, it has been argued that concentrate on study needs time, peace and comfort environment. When I study in my workplace, even it has the comfortable desk in use, but the study is irrelevant to what you work for, your supervisor or boss always have eyes on you which can not make you concentrate in it.
Moreover, another factor or scenario is when you study at your workplace, you are always interrupted by your work, your supervisor will give you a new assignment once when you just read the textbook. Undoubtedly, you cannot make your study happen when you at work.
In conclusion. I hold the point that study need dedicate time, peace and comfort, It is better to study at home after work than just simplely combine your study and work time together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ad the textbook. Undoubtedly, you cannot make your study happen when you at work....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74485596708 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57982932568 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526748971193 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7359546034 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.111111111 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260595212967 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124401879551 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730612577157 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175711693862 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613076712234 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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