Succesful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. do you support it? agree or disagree.
The impact of film stars as well as sports stars on the teenagers has always debateable topic whch has now become more controversial. some people think that celebrities put more effect on youngsters, whereas other think that some youngsters are not take them as role models. In my upcoming passages,I will discuss both sides and provide a logical conclusion.
On one side,some youngchildren take actor or actress their role models. Moreover, teenagers inspires from their lifestyle.They follow their fashions that how they talk, how they walk, so they look themself same as their rolemodel.Furthermore,somee youngsters motivated from their hardwork as well as their dedication towards work.
On the other hand,some folks adopt an opposing view and tend to belive that many teenegars have their parents as well as some have political leaders as their role models.Moreover, they like their parents views, hardworks.In addition, children grows up to see their parents dedication,love,care and simple way of living, which admires them more than any celebirity.
At last,from what has been discussed above it can be conducted that the impact of any famous people have positive as well as negative impact, but if we admires from our parents then it will gives us positive energy and makes us a successful person in a life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28436018957 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2749809657 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.601050832 50.4703680194 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.285714286 104.977214359 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.25397266985 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0710435817168 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04688518111 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721966140004 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482863082618 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677479591419 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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