For a successful company, selling products depends more on company's reputation or it depends more on if they provide discount and free offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of what makes a successful company, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of company's reputation or discount and free offers sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on companies sales of products in recent years. it can be agreed that for some people reputation is the most important thing, but for others discount and free offers are the most important. this essay will elaborate about quality and families budget and then will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why companies sell products, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that people trust in companies' reputation and tend to believe that it means products with quality. For instance, a university of Adelaide study demonstrated that rich people tend to buy based on companies' reputation owing to their beliefs on better quality. Hence, reputation can lead to companies sales.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that discount and free offers are more important than reputation as there are many reasons for that but the most salient one is that families need to control their expenses and, because of that, they purchase based on better price and not better quality. As an illustration, the university of South Australia has shown that 92% of the population buy based on price. Therefore, for a large percentage of the popultaion, discount and free offers are more important.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that quality and reputation are prominent, but the way discount and free offers impact should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1684981685 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7574511561 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.536902012 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26210608188 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102237306982 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575936435893 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153461122666 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501510899459 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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