Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u
support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Whether famous sport stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters or not has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of role models through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I would like to enunciate the advantages and disadvantages of role models and then will come to a conclusion.
The most prominent reason is that people watch movies for entertainment. But sometimes some movies are narrated so well that everyone likes the star who performed in the film and want to be like him/her. Moreover, sports person also play for the country and everyone likes them and want to be like them. For example, Sachin Tendulkar a famous cricketer of India who played for more 20 years and made so many world records, he is a role model for many youngsters.
While on the other hand, there are some drawbacks as well. The main reason is that sometimes people like the negative characters also from the movies; if they start to follow these types of activities in real life it can be dangerous for them. Moreover, celebrities have some bad habits as well like smoking, drugs and drinking. In addition, youngsters might attempt those habits and this can lead them to worse situations.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of famous personalities. I would like to conclude celebrities can be good role model for the youth generation unless they do not adopt the bad habits of stars and sports persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...elebrities have some bad habits as well like smoking, drugs and drinking. In additio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66620628483 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5918296404 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255088604811 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853363066529 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102445309894 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159721148845 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870350490545 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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