One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to see celebrities as a role model. There is a widespread worry that increased number of trends will only lead to a myriad of concerns in youngster's life. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that these famous personalities often show brighter side of the life and hide inner aspects from public. In fact, not only do they race for name, fame and money but they are unhappy with their family life. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact there is a negative correlation between success in life and choosing a role model. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact in the life of youngsters.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that celebrities often involve in illicit activities such as taking drug, brawling and doing stunt. There is a number of studies by various governmental bodies that show that almost all Hollywood actor and actress are involve in many illicit activities and they hardly serve any didactic purpose. Besides, the rise in the number of criminal acts by young people are mostly influence by celebrities actions where they want to imitate their actions. Hence, it is apparent why many people are against to see role model as a celebrity.
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude that the drawbacks of role model is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...ost all Hollywood actor and actress are involve in many illicit activities and they har...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85114503817 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69511327573 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5444714686 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135599087651 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498420030721 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052314913403 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775494277012 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306004752887 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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