Television has many useful functions to play in everyone's life, for some its relaxation, for some it is
companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
The modern era is full of electronic devices like Television, CD player, games etc. People entertained and enjoyed while doing these activities. These days, there is an ongoing debate that everyone's life has an impact of these electronic devices like Television. In this essay, I will discuss my point of view by providing examples.
Nowadays, after hectic work life, people want relaxation time to provide proper time for the brain to rehabilitate. Most of the people took TV as source of relaxation and they used to watch drama series daily by enjoying the time with their family. For instance, according to a market survey done in early 21st century showed that the sale of Television is gone drastically high. Hence, it is truth to say that each home has Television.
Similarly, watching television throughout the day can affect the health of a person. Social interaction of people would be compromised. Moreover, people who watched television for 10 hours a day have eyesight issues. For example, a study done by the University of Health Science revealed that exposing to electromagnetic ray for more period of time had adverse effects on human retina. Therefore, people should watch the television in a balanced way.
In a nutshell, watching television play a vital role in people's life. The essay discussed my point of view for Television impact on our daily life and its deleterious and harmful effects on human health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09745762712 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79425619985 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4577035412 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18550204687 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580225166358 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534804990484 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120669892266 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630636818815 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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