There are social medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones

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There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

president Donald trump conceded publicly for the first time Thursday that he will not serve a second term, stopping short of congratulating president-elect Joe biden but acknowledging a transfer of power is now underway.

it appeared to end, for now, trump's false and corrosive attempt to overthrow the election results, which culminated in a violent attempt at insurrection at the US Capitol a day earlier. it did not reckon with trump's role in fomenting that violence, nor did it contain a vow to change his behavior.
But with 13 days until biden is inaugurated, the president's comments in a prerecorded video amounted to as much of a concession as he is likely to offer before he departs the white house for good.
"A new administration will be inaugurated on January 20," trump said in the video, which was taped at the white house. "My focus now turns to ensuring a smooth, orderly and seamless transition of power."
A white house adviser in discussions with senior officials said trump recorded the video only because his presidency is threatened by looming resignations and potential impeachment.
"I think that video was done only because almost all his senior staff was about to resign, and impeachment is imminent," the adviser said.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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president Donald trump conceded publicly for the ...
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...transfer of power is now underway. it appeared to end, for now, trumps false ...
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...ection at the US Capitol a day earlier. it did not reckon with trumps role in fome...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esignations and potential impeachment. 'I think that video was done only becaus...
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...t to resign, and impeachment is imminent,' the adviser said.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2077294686 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09037558344 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1513050121 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0182841408375 0.242375264174 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00958432852919 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0113128512388 0.071462118173 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0103159575862 0.151781067708 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105803262397 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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