In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are
confronting many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem
among them? How can it be taken care of?
Nowadays, living in a modern era has brought governments devastating crises and addressing these issues has drawn the attention of the public. Some people believe that governments and organizations are suffering from internal issues while others hold the view that most of the problems are international ones. In my opinion, I am convinced that most of the organisations' problems are economical and educational.
First and foremost, it has been argued that the economical reason is why I think financial crises have captivated all of the countries, especially under developed ones. Governments are held accountable for many of the underprivileged areas in which people live in poverty. By having proper economical system and providing more job opportunities for people, government could pave the way to open up new businesses all over the its country. For instance, a well-known American financials once said," international organization should introduce and initiate raise-awareness programs for people to encourage them to be involved in different activities.
Moreover, another factor should be considered is educational problem, which in other words, having a great number of illiterate people leads to increasing unemployment and crimes. If individuals have adequate knowledge, they are more likely become a upstanding citizens. For instance, a recent research published on American Scientist revealed that most of the societies issues are driven from educational inefficiency of the society, which government should improve them to tackle such phenomenon.
To recapitulate, I opine that government and international organizations are confronting both economic and educational problems. To address these issue they need to make concerted effort to find solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... think financial crises have captivated all of the countries, especially under developed o...
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...eople live in poverty. By having proper economical system and providing more job opportuni...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
... way to open up new businesses all over the its country. For instance, a well-known Ame...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...well-known American financials once said,' international organization should intr...
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Message: Did you mean 'illiterates'?
Suggestion: illiterates
...n other words, having a great number of illiterate people leads to increasing unemployment...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... knowledge, they are more likely become a upstanding citizens. For instance, a re...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...hey are more likely become a upstanding citizens. For instance, a recent research publis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80842911877 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31603827833 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3365556433 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163029814656 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582763667563 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478139618352 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952946405955 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406276517107 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.