In town and cities, The large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of replacing the large shopping malls with the small local shops and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this changing is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the establishment of shop centers can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support replacing the large shopping centers with small local shops. At first, the one disadvantage of this changing is damaging to small shops' owners and damaging their earnings. However, in the shopping centers, the products of companies can be seen by more people and result in more sales. For example, the companies with products in food such as dairy products are competing to present their products in these places.
In addition, many small companies cannot compete with the large producers in the large shopping malls and maybe fail to continue. But, the companies have to enhance the quality of their products to save their status in the malls. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by THR University researchers in 2017 has shown that products presented in the large shop centers are in produced of best quality materials.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this opinion, I profoundly believe that the benefits of large shopping malls are far outweighed their drawbacks.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26033057851 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80316702545 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0855108628 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270808355 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116474652454 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107409088003 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175048120727 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033654711426 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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