Extreme sports ( dangerous activities ) like skiing, bungee jumping, rafting' diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of extreme sports and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that dangerous activities can be highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that prohibiting these sports can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with banning the vigorous sports. At first, it seems these activities are good entertainments for people who do adventure works. However, these sports are very harmful to the human body. For example, it is possible to break bones or even die in some kind of sports such as bungee jumping and rafting.
In addition, these activities can make happy moments for the people who interested in the extreme sports. But, to cure the damages of the dangerous activities need to high-cost treatment that should be done by governmental insures. For instance, a recent research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2011 has shown that a significant number of people injured by these sports, need to governmental helps to cure their pains that have negative effects on government budgets.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the extreme sports, I profoundly believe that despite their entertainments, the drawbacks of the vigorous activities are far outweighed by their benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35371179039 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00540755813 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3722867262 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.454545455 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182149484022 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677038965653 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380795232561 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100695745873 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032098634086 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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