In this day and age, some people think the minus effects of computer technologies has been more than their benefits. Although this notion accepted by a large number of people,
There are many of expert have a fully distinct view against this topic. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to promote worries among people about last computer technologies.
First and foremost, today, the anxiety of information security increased because the information became digitalized and due to their less volume, rob them became easier and faster.
For example, the personal information of company members or financial information of a bank can insert in a flash drive and to be sold by staff members.
Secondly, the cyber-attack is another problem and is a way of war between countries that have a lot of economic damages for a country that got attacked.
For instance, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers shows that attacked to many of governmental, banking, airport, powerhouse systems by hackers of enemy countries all around the world.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons for disapproval the computer technologies from people, in my personal sentiment, although these means have had many advantages for us, but their negative effects are far of their benefits regardless of security issues.
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...iscuss why I agree with this statement. To begin with, there are various rea...
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...nemy countries all around the world. In conclusion, there are several compell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35840707965 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84215839794 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641592920354 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.255370114 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183788345305 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075394576828 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764195421361 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712732519814 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721041798623 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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