The violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
It is formidable truth that Our society is under the influence of film fraternity. we try to imitate what appear on our TV screens without assessing its consequences but it's hard to believe that this can cause increase of criminality in our society. I will analyze that throughout this essay.
There are certain powerful factors such as unemployment, famine, injustice, corruption etc. need to consider to understand that how someone become a criminal. For an instance, we all have heard story of dacoit Pansingh Tomar, who was national athlete and celebrated soldier in the Indian army. He faced injustice which transformed him to a criminal. Therefore it would be wrong to say that movies or cinema are the root cause of crime in society.
However, to some extent I am agreed that watching violence in movies and T.V shows generate disturbance in our mind and influence us to imitate it. For example, there was an infamous murder case in which an husband killed his wife exactly the way he watched in some Hollywood movie. Though it's apparent that people get influence by movies and T.V shows and some people may do such activities those can have harmful implications on our society but the majority of people cannot be judged based on misdeed done by few psycho's.
In the end, I conclude based on the compelling arguments that violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies doesn't leads to an increase in crime in our society. It is injustice which leads that and as Martin Luther King Jr. said that "Injustice anywhere is the threat to justice everywhere"
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90262172285 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77400436659 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4498069446 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306153421925 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877992920476 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981156083584 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161163383228 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647140292891 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.