In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
The issue that in the war of ideas, common man suffers from the group ideology was debateable has become more controversial. The substantial influence of group ideology cause destruction and the victim are always common man has evoked the controversy over the potential impact of its trend. From my perspective, I firmly agree with the statement because the mankind is divided into various fragments according to their colour, race, religions and conflicts and disagreements always exist among different groups.
At the outset, the world is witness of violence from centuries, as one religion try to dominate the others. For instance, terrorism on the basis of religion where one group’s point of view is totally different from other’s cause genocide against minor religion group members. In these kind of horrendous actions, the victims are always the common man and the most vulnerable persons of that society.
Another key justification upholding the notion is that politics is also an effective tool to impose the group ideology on members of the society. Political leaders have various narratives based of their political agendas try to manipulate the minds of ordinary citizens in order to gain power but the opposition ideas are always contrary which lead toward dispute and some time it turns into violent protests, hence the ordinary people suffer in the shape of economic and physical loss.
Taking into account all the facts mentioned previously, I would like to recapitulate that every individual has his own distinguished ideas and it is not necessary to support the group’s opinion and so become the sufferer. However, the acquisition of false and misleading information among groups is always disastrous and destructive for common man.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...gainst minor religion group members. In these kind of horrendous actions, the victims are ...
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Line 4, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...astrous and destructive for common man.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37050359712 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85282642331 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.219119304 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.3 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256043645722 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969775680773 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715457985569 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141267747014 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553633479809 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.