Obviously, whether a common man suffers from a group's ideology or not has become a focus of controversies and public attention. An increasing number of people do have much faith in group's ideology. However, I still consider that group has bad effects on individual wealth due to the fact that every common person have to make compromise when the group's ideology is endangered. Additionally, the behavior of other people in the group can influence individual's actions.
Most importantly, one must recognize that people can be complained by others in a group or a community, which means that they must change themselves to avoid blame. A research carried out by the UN revealed that people who deny to follow group's ideology is sixty percent less likely to have a good health despite the seemingly positive effects the group brings. I still reckon that its shortcomings are greater than benefits.
It should also be emphasized that people may copy the dangerous actions from the group. Due to we do not want to stand out of the group. Based on my experience, children tend to behave badly when their classmates are doing bad things.
So my opinion is clear that the people can easily suffered from group’s ideology. To say otherwise is to deny the simple facts elaborated above that people have to sacifice personal willings, as well as that someone may be affected by the negative influences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...ly, whether a common man suffers from a groups ideology or not has become a focus of c...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...person have to make compromise when the groups ideology is endangered. Additionally, t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny following'.
Suggestion: deny following
... out by the UN revealed that people who deny to follow groups ideology is sixty percent less l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, well, as well as, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9914893617 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74823784029 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9912123639 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224412946449 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852738074159 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753443122179 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133285717843 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490821921378 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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