What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
One of the most controversial issues today related to how people actively online in social media for all the time. In this essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantage of spending time on social media 24 hours a day.
On of the advantage of connected on social media is extremely fast information or new spreading. The reason for this is that information can be transfer through individual device in just a few second then all other recipients will be told about all political situations or celebrity’s news. In addition, everyone will be connected with each other because social media is the cheapest way for people to make a telephone call or text message. For example, Facebook messenger has feature for users to make video call to anyone.
An commonly mention of disadvantage of social media is the diminish of face to face meeting. People think they are connect by social media, so they don’t really spend really time to see each other and create a really friendly environment. Furthermore, critics say it made people lost their social communication skill because they don’t have opportunities to acquire this soft skill. According to a study, millennial have lower emotion intelligence since they spend lesser time to get involve with other people
In conclusion, I believe social media has bother good points and pitfall. It has shown it helps improve ways of communication but it also made people lack of their social skills in the same time. It
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, really, second, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05284552846 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83918281997 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7050725956 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250544093566 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108482247205 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688722916754 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161438750022 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704746635444 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.