Extreme sports have become extremely popular these days. While some people are of the opinion that these activities should not be encouraged, others assert the notion that these games are requisite to acquire numerous benefits out of it. This essay will discuss why this kind of sports is advantageous and should not be deterred.
Adventurous sports offers the participants a massive amount of courage. In other words, these activities enable them to overcome from fear to a certain extent. For example, I would not have able to kill my fear if I had not participated in paragliding last year. Therefore, these activities are essential to building outstanding bravery.
Moreover, dangerous activities facilitate us with a colossal amount of fun and joy. Since people, these days, are keeping themselves busy in one or the other works, they require a considerable amount of break to get rid of massive stress. A study, for instance, stated that those who enjoy extreme activities once in a while are happy people than those do not. Thus, these sports are quite necessary for enjoyment.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why dangerous sports are beneficial as they spur your boldness as well as your happiness. I believe that these sports are necessary for the mentioned reasons and should be encouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7629895761 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7645158183 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9230769231 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134441895123 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505832883945 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479522882943 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088264750183 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509563246287 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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