Whether experimental learning/practical learning can work well in formal education/traditional teaching, agree or disagree?
or
Experience is a more effective way to teach, compared to books? Agree or disagree?
In our contemporary world, there has a heated debate on whether the life experience is more important than the formal education or not. Although some people believed that life experience have more benefits to our career path, I am convinced that the formal education is more important, and the consequent problems will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, I do admit that the formal education provide in schools and universities offers a wide range of learning opportunities. To be more specific, academic activities not only provide students with important specialized knowledge, but also encourage hard work, self-discipline, focus and enthusiasm for learning. These qualities improve students to continue gaining new knowledge and skills even after leaving university. Therefore, the formal education makes them more successful in their future careers.
Moreover, there are numerous reasons why the formal education is more important, but the most obvious one in the fact that it helps us to think more independently and critically.In other words, it is vital for us to our life and career, because todays people need this ability to invent and innovate. For example, research projects promote students to explore questions, form their own ideas and develop their own explanations and solutions. In this process, we develop the independent and critical thinking.
In conclusion, the formal education today develops the desire for lifelong learning and independent thinking, hence there is more important than life experience.
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| 2018-10-10 | Mohammad1364 | 88 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...think more independently and critically.In other words, it is vital for us to our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63559322034 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9594689763 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614406779661 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3071535679 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150402231423 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637657575865 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481102498194 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100781211149 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325106677033 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.