Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter, where people are confused about who should hold the responsibility for climate change, Government or the Industries? This has elicited stimulated disputation among the public. I believe that both need to take the equal responsibility, but some people think that its the Government. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, There are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reason is that Climate change is the broad issue and everyone including the individual hold the responsibility to take care of it. Where Industries need to realize the importance of the climate change and need to bring the change, On the other hand, the Government needs to bring the reforms and strict policy for the adamant industries.
On the contrary, There are sceptics who conjecture that its the sole responsibility of the Government. They say, unless Government brings any policy and reform, and enforce the law most industries would float the rules and continue to damage the environment. Although It seems ostensibly veridical, a will to contribute is still required, even if the government bring the policy and enforce the law, individual will still float the rule as and when they get the chance, hence the self-realization and awareness hold the key.
After analyzing the above facts, I would like to recapitulate that, Climate change is the big and serious issue, Hence, Both government and Industries needs to take the responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ponsibility, but some people think that its the Government. This essay will further...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... There are sceptics who conjecture that its the sole responsibility of the Governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17735849057 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92056944466 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0612987692 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.2 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242817751102 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889648858672 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776298496173 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147987537179 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282039038407 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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