Write the advantages of computers in this modern era.
In the tech-savvy era, it is an undenial fact that humanbeings have advanced tremendously and current era is enriched with inventions. our researchers or developers have developed many new innovations and the process is still going on. The computer invention is made possible to explore other inventions and discoveries more rapidly. I will share my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, computers have myriad advantages, firstly and foremost , it has multitasking features taht can minimize your work , they can display and let you manipulate stored information, and they are used in almost all fields for any purposes.Moreover, it has huge storage capacity to stores videos, audios and photoes etcetera and it has become easy for the doctors to do major surgeries with minor stiches, MRI,X-rays and CT scan.Furthermore, computer is the electronic marvel which is been used in almost every sector like education, medical, scintific, robotics , avitation, transportation and space research.
Further reinforcing, with the help of computers, canyone can search anything on the internet and can also download the whole encyclopedia and wikipedia within few minutes. This example clearly shows how computer led to internet and high storage which changed the face of communication.Thus, the computer is indeed the greatest invention.
To conclude, computers have touched our lives in everyway and have entirely changed the way humans and led there since the time immemorial.computers are the indispensable and elixir of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56595744681 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35021265953 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.473533933 50.4703680194 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.5 104.977214359 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145382172419 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581254172285 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545645130092 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837853346061 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226970344208 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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