You need to study climate change. Which aspect of climate change will you choose and why? Use examples.
A prevalent phenomenon of the contemporary society is that climate change has long been a matter of a considerable controversy. If I am given climate as my field of study, I would like to study the underlying causes of the devastating global warming phenomenon and possible solutions to tackle it.
Taking the first point into consideration, there are numerous reasons why I choose this particular area of study, but the obvious one lies in the fact that we have been experiencing the hottest 15 years on record in the last two decades. Linked to this is the fact that millions are at the risk of drought, chronic water shortage, bushfire, coastal flooding and hazardous air pollution. Therefore, by knowing the causes, we can take some measurements to prevent the deteriorating of the situation.
Turning to the other perspectives, it is hard to deny that the issues of climate change must be addressed with a sense of urgency. As individuals, we can help by taking actions to reduce our personal carbon emissions. For instance, taking public transportation or carpool, which can effectively reduce the release of the greenhouse gases that committed to the global warming. Last but not least, to fully address the threat, the government should also implement a comprehensive set of climate solutions.
In conclusion, it is my considered opinion that once we understand the factors that contribute to the changes in the climate, people can effectively take some considerable measurements to deal with the issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17004048583 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1007547148 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1485805097 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129101080589 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480769681958 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421662492025 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723773735398 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463671909986 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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