What is your point of view of the idea that every obstacle can be turned into an opportunity? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience,or observations.
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I believe that problems and obstacles can't be turned into an opportunity. It is such a thing that would completely ruin our plan at the moment and may have the risk of ruining us more. In my personal view, risk is something tht could not be taken.
For an example, a man played and lost a gamble, trying to defeat his crisis, he tries to win back the money by betting more and losing all of his money at the end. Also for another example, a kid, who's playing at the beach and making sand castles,minds out that there's a little r...
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Sentence: As if an animal had broke it's leg, it would have to continue its life with the broken leg.
Description: A verb 'to have', past tense is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to had and broke
Sentence: Barack Obama, who is facing against mitt Romney in the elections, admitted that their is an economic problem and they must carry on with it, while he talked about several other reasons to elect him instead.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Refer to their and is
Sentence: He knew that trying to turn the problem into some type of opportunity, and dicing his countries economy wouldnt have good results.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and economy
Sentence: As a result of this, we can say that obstacles are something we shouldnt joke about or take risk.
Error: shouldnt Suggestion: should not
Sentence: We should remember this quote and should be ready to face the consequences of the obstacles that we come across, as turning things to a profit wouldnt be a good idea if the problem is an obstacle.
Error: wouldnt Suggestion: would not
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