Write a paragraph about the following topic : there are many people wearing skins of dead animals. Why do people like it?
It is true that people these days tend to wear clothes made from skin of dead animals for several reasons. First, fur or leather clothes are usually very fashionable. Although they cost a lot of money, people are still willing to purchase them just to follow the trend. Second, in some countries people hunt animals for taking their skin so as to make warm and soft clothes. Thanks to these, they can survive throughout the winter. Third, noone can deny that dead animals' skin is a good material. It is thick and strong and we can easily make every kind of clothes with it such as boots, coats, jeans, etc... To sump up, people like wearing dead animals' skin because of their many advantages.
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Sentence: Second, in some countries people hunt animals for taking their skin so as to make warm and soft clothes.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and people
Sentence: Third, noone can deny that dead animals' skin is a good material.
Error: noone Suggestion: No alternate word
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