While making students keep journals is a controversial topic among teachers, I believe it is beneficial to ask students to take notes on the subjects they have been taught. Students, especially primary school students, should work on improving their handwriting. Accordingly, keeping journals is not only a helpful opportunity that helps them to develop their writing skills but also a method for teachers to spot their writing problems as well as their misunderstandings. As Clair astutely mentioned, teachers will have a chance to realize students’ comprehension of the topic and will solve their deficiencies before getting too late. For instance, I had several friends who had learned some topics completely wrong, and they had not noticed it until their higher- education level. Thus, note-taking is a crucial technique for the students’ improvement.
- The golden frog is a small bright yellow amphibian that lives in and around mountain streams in Panama The species is severely endangered because of a fungus that infects the frog through its skin and inhibits the frog s critical life functions such as br 83
- In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explore 80
- Many companies sell products or services but at the same time cause environmental damage Someone said it can be stop by ask them to pay penalty such as a higher tax when they cause the environmental damage Others said there are better ways to stop them fr 76
- Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world From the fossil remains we know that agnostids were primitive arthropods relatives of modern 3
- Question Doctor Diaz Our next class will focus on how companies maintain their staffing levels While it is important for a company to look for new employees to fill open positions many believe it is equally important for a company to retain the workers it 70
need to review Claire' opinion too
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 5
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 9
No. of Words: 132 150
No. of Characters: 707 900
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.39 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.356 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.985 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.641 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.452 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.452 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5