Studying has a great effect on our lives. The way we study is important and we have to plan it well to achieve our goals. Many students prefer to study alone but others not. Personally, I prefer to studying with a group for three important reasons.
First, I have a benefit of exchanging experience with other students. As studying in a group give us the chance to get a lot o different ideas and explanations. For example, when I were at high school, I and my group study have to prepare for a chemistry project. So we all worked together, collected all the information and finally we discussed all the materials. That will not happened if I Try to made it alone.
Second, in studying group, we have to work together as I mentioned, and thus we save time as we are dividing the work and every one has to do his part. By this we are going to finish faster. For example, yesterday, my son told me how his group win the contest because they all work together hardly and win the first place. While others prefer to work alone.
Third, studying in a group also gives us experience how to interact with each other. We learn how to listen to other and respect other opinions. This will help us in our work in the future. Nowadays, many work depends on how we deal with others and sometimes we have open discussions. So we will going to work with a large groups and we must know how to deal with this.
In conclusion, I think that by studying in groups we will have a lot of advantages. Not only we will get a variety of ideas but also have a great experience which will help us in future in our careers. So that's why I prefer a group studying.
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when I were at high school, I and my group study have to prepare for a chemistry project.
Suggestion: when I were at high school, my group and I study have to prepare for a chemistry project.
Sentence: As studying in a group give us the chance to get a lot o different ideas and explanations.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: So we will going to work with a large groups and we must know how to deal with this.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
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