122)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
In this highly competitive world each and everybody wants to be different from each other, their dreams are different. From thousands of years human's wants to be different ans that is the human tendency. Each day we dream about our goals and to change our-self from others. I agree to the above statement that people are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different.
First of all, people doesn't like to repeat the same thing everyday, they want to be different in life. Due to more competition in every field, people want to do challenging task/work then other people. Then only they will reach to their goal. Doing the same thing in life is boring, everybody need change in their day to day life. For instance, in a company there are many people with, sometimes equal interests or different ones. To climb the ladder of the success in a company people compete with difficult and challenging task to be number one and get more appreciation. And this type of competing the challenging task is never ending. Day by day the curiosity of attempting to do the challenging work continues, where there is no satisfaction of achieving one task.
In addition, recognition is the biggest desire a person have. People want to be different and to be recognized by other people around them. There is no doubt that in this world everyone are different from others but this is not enough for people they want to be even more different. For instance, college students want to wear colourful, stylish and trendy clothes. They don't want their friends to wear the same dress, because they want to look different and special. Not only clothes but also we change our automobiles, accessories and many more.
Furthermore, money and status in the society creates different atmosphere in the whole world. Some people think earning more money will increase their status in the society, and the is a common culture in our society. People never put an end to their dreams or temptations. Always human desire chain starts from basic, necessary, luxuries, comfort, success, expectations and many more are never ending things in life. People always dream about what they don't have, and try to acquire those things in every level of their life. Just to prove that they are different from others, and they love the changes in their life. Respect follows the money and status in the society. For instance, rich people are every-time highlighted and given more respect.
In conclusion, change is always needed in ones life. Everyone dream to be different in their personal or professional life. Expectation increases day by day once you start achieving challenging work and become recognized in the society. Money and status highlights the main difference in ones life.
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Sentence: From thousands of years human's wants to be different ans that is the human tendency.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? what is ans?
Sentence: There is no doubt that in this world everyone are different from others but this is not enough for people they want to be even more different.
Description: A pronoun, nominal is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', present tense, 2nd person singular or all
Suggestion: Refer to everyone and are
Sentence: In conclusion, change is always needed in ones life.
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Suggestion: one's life
recognition is the biggest desire a person have.
recognition is the biggest desire a person has.
Sentence: Everyone dream to be different in their personal or professional life.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dream with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
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