Personally, I would prefer the items made by hand over the items made by machine. I always feel that the items made by hand carry the soul of the person who made them. When I use these items which are made by hand, i feel the touch, the suffering, and even the joy of that hand. Items made by hands often tell stories.
Nowadays, machines invade our world, our life, and even our soul. We became a big fan of machines. We use them in all aspects in our modern life but machines stay machines-solid materials. Machines can produce good items but they will never carry an experience or tell a story. Machines steel our humanity from us and unfortunately we allow them to do so.
All over history, the only items that remain and become a part of our national treasure are the items made by the hands of our ancestors. The most beautiful paintings, the most precious antiques, and the most famous tools are those that made by hand. They carry authenticity, beauty, history, and even express the mystery of the past. One of the most beautiful items made by hand, which I appreciate a lot, is the Monaliza. This painting carries a lot of stories; every person can imagine his own story told by Monaliza. Another example is the Egyptian monuments that persisted over thousands of years and still keep their beauty as if they are made recently. Besides, they tell the Egyptian history and civilization even better than any historian.
In conclusion, we can trust the items made by hands and respect them. We may use the items made by machine in our daily life because they are cheap, however, we will pay anything to obtain an original handmade item because it always captures the hearts.
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Which items should i focus on
Which items should i focus on to improve my score up to 30 over 30 ?
Well, look at the flaws: No.
Well, look at the flaws:
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.667 21.0
Suggestions to get 30 in 30:
1. More content wanted. Around 350 words will be perfect.
2. More compound or complex sentences wanted.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.667 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1340 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.467 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.298 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.298 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.196 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5