143. Students should have one big vacation or several short vacations.
I believe that everybody likes to have more time to relax and to have fun. Some people believe that students should have one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several vacations throughout the year. I personally believe that it is better for students to have several vacations.
The most important thing in a students live is to be successful. In order to be successful he has to be able to concentrate, to learn as much as he can. Having several vacations will help the student to have his mind fresh, to be able to concentrate, knowing that he can relax taking several vacations.
After each vacation the students come back to courses with new forces and with desire to get some more knowledge. For example, my husband is a teacher and he is telling me that every time after vacation his students are exciting to come back to school and they are not so easily distracted like at the end of semester when they are tired.
Last but not at least, I believe that having several vacations will make students more efficient in their studies. For instance, from my experience I have learned that short breaks really help me to be more efficient in my work. I always come back to work with new forces during the week, after my lunch in the contrast with Saturdays when I don't take lunch. That is why on Saturdays, the last couple of hours at work I feel less efficient because I didn't have a break.
From the arguments stated above it can be conclude that in order to be successful a students needs to be able to concentrate and having several vacations will definitely help the him come back to the courses with a fresh mind and ready to accumulate more knowledge.
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Don't go example immediately after you wrote the reason. you need to argue why this reason....after argument, then put example.
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