39.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays education is one of the most important parts of our lives. Certainly, today people are more eager to learning than last decades. All in all, there are several reasons for improvment of education. One of the most important reasons is technology, which facilitated learning. Some people are not consence with me, they refute the important role of technology in making better education without any wise reason, on the other hand, most of the people including me are agree with this statement and support it. I have several logical and rational reasons for supporting my idea. argues such as plentifulness of sources, feasibility to learn always and everywhere, and in addition Elearning are the consequences of helps of technology in education.
The main reason or supporting my idea is availability of a variety of sources for providing better education. Generally, all of the parents and students unanimously will approve that, there are lots of materials, books,web sites, movies, and medias are in existance just for providing better infrastructures for students to learn better and faster. For example, I remember, ten years ago when I was studying in elementary school there was not lots of facilities like now. Having a problem we need to wait for visiting our teacher in school and it was time consuming. In addition, waiting for next week's class we were losing our enthusiasem and might not ask that problem. but today, student can easily surf the internet and find answers of their questions. Therefore, I think advancement helped us a lot.
Second reason for me is the ability of learning 24/7. It is a fact that, today everyone can study always everywhere. Thanks to technology, nothing can stop us from learning and teaching. As an instance, I myself during last semester had to do a research. I was working hard but I cannot due my assignment on time. Possibility of learning education all the time I could do my research in the best way. I remember I was surfing internet at midnight and completed my research. If there was no technology like internet network or even computers, I would not be able to complete my works.
The last but not least, is Elearning. Helping some communication technologies scientists are developed Elearning service, which helps people to study from far distance. For example, imagine individuals from India, China, Africa, or even myself from Iran can present virtually in a class in Stanford university and study easily without wast of time. So that, we can find it out technology is undeniable in today's education.
In my opinion,today helping technology students can learn more information, more quickly. Because of three main services which technology offers to us. There are availability of mass of sources, also ability to study all time everywhere, and last one is Elearning. Thus, I am positive that we should be thankful of technology which helped our education to improve rapidly.
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most of the people including me are agree with this statement and support it.
most of the people including me agree with this statement and support it.
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