Animals need to be freed from zoos. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Animals need to be freed from zoos. Do you agree or disagree?

Every creature on this earth has freedom to live on it’s own will. Each animal get accustomed to their own habitat, and spend their whole life in their habitat. However, human beings are using the wild animals and birds for their own advantage. Zoo is the place where animals and birds are kept in cages and feed them regularly. I believe, the animals need to be freed and leave them back to their earlier habitats.

First, much of the wild animal’s behaviour has been changed. Animals such as Lion, Tiger are brought into zoos, they are regularly fed with the food. But, after some time it sta...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Votes
Average: 9 (2 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2014-10-20 mayaa 80 view
Essay Categories

Comments

Each animal get accustomed to their own habitat, and spend their whole life in their habitat.
Suggestion: Each animal gets accustomed to their own habitat, and spends their whole life in their habitat.

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.588 7.5

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 368 350
No. of Characters: 1605 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.38 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.361 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.09 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.588 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.445 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

Thank You. I type very slowly, need to improve on it.
You are doing wonderful job. Helping many students in their preparation. I salute you. I thank TestBig for providing this platform to learn.

Regards,
Prajwal