Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to the future generations.

The way people live is absolutely changing from generation to another. Some changes are inevitably promising , others might be discouraging. If I to compare the life of our generation with that of our parents, there are definitely so many changes to be discussed.

First of all, the social life of my parents is different from ours. They basically still consider the traditional social visits between people very significant. For example; my parents still plan visits to other members of the family as well as to their friends on regular basis. Moreover, in regard to the food, my parents prefer to...

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