Compare yourself today and yourself five years ago. In what ways are you the same or different? Use specific examples to support your response.
It is undeniable that as time goes on everything is varying, and also my life has changed in various ways since 2008. Although, some aspects of my life maintained stable, such as my hometown, friends and interests, there are numerous subjects that I have changed in this time.
I have a genuine interest to my hometown, in this place not only I was born and spent my childhood but also I had a chance to construct my future along my family. I did not alter my hometown because I could sense my family’s support while I am here. Furthermore I had a perfect fortune to find sensible friends whom are my acquaintance for more than 5 years. From my childhood, I have played the piano and spent my free time at movies; and still I am keen with these two entertainments as well as my youngster period.
When I am thinking in depth about my changes during 5 years, I encounter enormous issues. From my perspective the valuable one is my educational degree. Recently I have graduated from bachelor science and I increased my knowledge as well as my working sophistication in a laboratory. In addition, I could be employed in a fully equipped laboratory as a supervisor of microbiology department. On the other hand, I have changed my appearance by having a surgery on my nose. I think the impact of this change on my confidence has been positive.
To sum up, I believe that each person needs to alter his/her life. But the main point is recognizing a correct path when you encounter a dilemma. I like my changes and I have tried to find the best for myself.
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