Did the Dinosaurs endothermic ?
reading passage support the statement and lecture oppose the statement by providing the reasons. question is like that summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the passage .
Did the Dinosaurs endotherms ?
The given reading passage said that the dinosaurs were endotherms by providing the three reasons. The first resaon is the of dinasaurs fossils found in polar region ,second one is the postion of the legs were underneath the body insted of the body's side like crocodiles and last one is that present of Haversian canal bone. All this reasons support that Dinosaurs were endotherms.However the lecture provides some point which oppose this reasons.let see then one by one.
First reason is that, the fossils of dinosaurs found in the polar region which is so cool. It means that they can maintain there body temperature in cool region. It ture that fossils found in the polar region but it not proof that the dinosaurs were endotherms. The leacturer said that the dinasaurs migrated or hibernated when the winter stared.so this is not strong evidence to proof that the dinosaurs were endotherms.
Second reasons is that dinasaurs had leg which was underneath the body insted of the body's side like crocodiles which tells that they were endotherms.It is one of the charteristic of the endotherms. However lecturer saod that they had leg underneath the body beacuse they had larger body shape . so beare that weight they hda that kind of legs stucture.Again this is not sufficent and articulate reason to proof that the dinosaurs were endotherms.
Lastly the presence of the Haversian bone in dinasaurs . This ture but the this bone stucture used by them to give support to their body growth not for the maintain the body temperature. So to proof that the dinosaurs were endotherms we must have strongd prrof instead of these.
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Sentence: The first resaon is the of dinasaurs fossils found in polar region ,second one is the postion of the legs were underneath the body insted of the body's side like crocodiles and last one is that present of Haversian canal bone.
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Sentence: All this reasons support that Dinosaurs were endotherms.
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some point which oppose this reasons
some points which oppose these reasons
It ture that fossils found in...
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Sentence: This ture but the this bone stucture used by them to give support to their body growth not for the maintain the body temperature.
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Sentence: The first resaon is the of dinasaurs fossils found in polar region , second one is the postion of the legs were underneath the body insted of the body's side like crocodiles and last one is that present of Haversian canal bone.
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Sentence: However lecturer saod that they had leg underneath the body beacuse they had larger body shape . so beare that weight they hda that kind of legs stucture.
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Error: hda Suggestion: had
Error: beare Suggestion: bear
Error: beacuse Suggestion: because
Error: stucture Suggestion: structure
Sentence: Again this is not sufficent and articulate reason to proof that the dinosaurs were endotherms.
Error: sufficent Suggestion: sufficient
Sentence: So to proof that the dinosaurs were endotherms we must have strongd prrof instead of these.
Error: strongd Suggestion: strong
Error: prrof Suggestion: proof
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Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 276 250
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No. of Different Words: 117 150
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.452 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
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