Do you agree with the following statement? Good teachers are more important to a child’s development than good parents. Use specific details to support your argument.
Education brings about a considerable help to children in order they can reach a correct development of themselves. However, this task of forming children for the future in a correct way does not fall entirely in teachers, but it is a mission shared, where parents have the major responsibility of assist the development of their children. Personally I believe that good parents are more important than good teachers in order to children develop themselves for three reasons, which are good parents are the first person that child know and respect, good parents can become a good teachers and teachers do not fulfill all necessary for a good children’s development.
First and foremost, mothers are the person who babies see at first. As in the animal kingdom as in mankind, babies are together to their mother all time after they were born. This fact makes an intrinsic string between mother and her child; and later, this pass to father as well. For this reason, a child tends to respect more than other person to their parents, who are in charge to contribute mainly to his/her development. Thus, child’s behavior will be form since they are kids, before they have gone to school to be taught by teachers.
Secondly, good teachers are not just good persons who studied for teach in a good way but good teachers involve persons who have the ability to transmit knowledge or conducts adequately. Thus, good parents could become in good teachers for their children, specifically. For instance, there are some children who, for any reason, cannot go to school in order to learn and be able to develop. In many case, the labor of teachers have to be replaced by their parents, who want the best for their kid. Therefore, is it necessary good teachers to assist children to be able to develop themselves in this case? As you can realize, it is definitely no.
Last but not least, in order to kids are be able to develop excellently, they have to be helped by adults in some issues, which are not only education. Good teachers can assist their pupils in developing their capacity of reading and writing, for example. Nevertheless, there are other issues which deserve a help to be completely developed. These issues could be a formation of good manners or even the development of love for God, which correspond undoubtedly to form to good parents. Therefore, children need more than good teachers, good parents to complete the development of some qualities different to the related to education.
In a nutshell, considering all these factors, we can reach the conclusion that although some people could think that for the correct formation of children, they need good teachers. I strongly believe that good parents gather all the characteristics to form their own children in the best way.
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Sentence: However, this task of forming children for the future in a correct way does not fall entirely in teachers, but it is a mission shared, where parents have the major responsibility of assist the development of their children.
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Sentence: Personally I believe that good parents are more important than good teachers in order to children develop themselves for three reasons, which are good parents are the first person that child know and respect, good parents can become a good teachers and teachers do not fulfill all necessary for a good children's development.
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Sentence: First and foremost, mothers are the person who babies see at first.
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Last but not least, in order to kids are be able to develop excellently,
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Sentence: In many case, the labor of teachers have to be replaced by their parents, who want the best for their kid.
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