Do you agree or disagree? The childhood is the happiest period of a person's life.

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Do you agree or disagree? The childhood is the happiest period of a person's life.

I totally agree with the statement that childhood is the happiest period of a person's life specially as I thinks that my childhood was the best time of my life that I can remember.

The childhood is the time that a person bears no or least responsibility in his/her life. In contrast, all other adults are responsible for the children's well being, happiness, and convenience. No one expects a little child to be concerned about family income, taxes, shopping, or household jobs. They can freely play with their toys and imagine themselves as kings or queens of their dream lands in their self-dir...

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Sentence: I totally agree with the statement that childhood is the happiest period of a person's life specially as I thinks that my childhood was the best time of my life that I can remember.
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Sentence: They have simple goals and no greed to put them under pressures that adults usually should beer.
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Sentence: It is very pleasant to be pampered by adults.
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