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Do you agree or disagree? The childhood is the happiest period of a person's life.
I totally agree with the statement that childhood is the happiest period of a person's life specially as I thinks that my childhood was the best time of my life that I can remember.
The childhood is the time that a person bears no or least responsibility in his/her life. In contrast, all other adults are responsible for the children's well being, happiness, and convenience. No one expects a little child to be concerned about family income, taxes, shopping, or household jobs. They can freely play with their toys and imagine themselves as kings or queens of their dream lands in their self-dir...
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Sentence: I totally agree with the statement that childhood is the happiest period of a person's life specially as I thinks that my childhood was the best time of my life that I can remember.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to I and thinks
Sentence: They have simple goals and no greed to put them under pressures that adults usually should beer.
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Sentence: It is very pleasant to be pampered by adults.
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 412 350
No. of Characters: 1941 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.505 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.711 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.486 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.605 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.409 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.256 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.512 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
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