Being a teacher is one of the most respectful and applausable professions in the world. A good teacher, in particular, is someone who devotes his life for teaching students, by setting for them various challenging tasks through which, they can be much more prepared to confront a world full of challenges, they can become more sel confident and they can create a better future.
First of all, good teachers seek challenging tasks for their students, to make them stronger, promptly capable to take considerate actions when necessary. For example; from time to time, a good teacher prepare tests an...
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Sentence: For example; from time to time, a good teacher prepare tests and Quizzes for his students, where they need to study and feed their brains with all of the information needed to ace their exams.
Description: The fragment teacher prepare tests is rare
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Sentence: Being a teacher is one of the most respectful and applausable professions in the world.
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Sentence: Finally, challenging tasks are often set by good teachers to provoke a better and proliferative future.
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