Nowadays, by development of technology and promotion of levels of education, life is easier and more comfortable than our grandparents' time. I will render my reasons as follows.
First, health is a serious factor in human survival. There are several hospitals and clinics in our surroundings which in urgent situation make them accessible. The number of expert doctors is increasing in various fields and some unknown illnesses in our grandparents' age are known in our time. All of these are based on academic efforts and devotion of time and life of many sympathetic humans. Whiles, the number o...
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