Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Currently, teenagers are faced with increasingly difficult problems such as the high rate of unemployment, finial crisis and unsafe condition in the university. Thus, in order to perfectly adjust to the current society, people should learn how to plan and organize

First of all, as a proverb goes, "opportunity is always ready for the people with preparation". We can conclude from the words that individuals should plan for their future for the sake of obtaining potential chance. Contrast to the present , faced with little pressure, people were readily to get a job, establish a trad...

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Sentence: For example, my friend Jim, a intelligent people , who is expert in academic performance, even could not make a choice when he confront the two ways which can be chosen.
Description: The fragment he confront the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace confront with verb, past tense

Sentence: At last, due to his difficulty in choosing, he lose a splendid opportunity for the high salary and high statue job.
Description: The fragment he lose a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace lose with verb, past tense

Sentence: Currently, teenagers are faced with increasingly difficult problems such as the high rate of unemployment, finial crisis and unsafe condition in the university.
Error: finial Suggestion: financial

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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 503 350
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No. of Different Words: 264 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.736 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.903 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.722 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.63 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.651 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.259 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
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