Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Money is the most important factor in everyone's life. In present days no work can be accomplished without money. These days many people states that money is the medium by which one measures worldly success. I think the statement " The most important aspect of a job is the money the person earns " is definitely right. I would like to support my statement mainly for three reasons.
Firstly, our society have categorized people based on their economic status into three different classes, they are upper class, middle class and lower class. Do any one think why they have categorized into three classes? The answer is just on the basis of money. This strongly implies that money is very important to have special prestige in the society.
Secondly, now -a -days most of the parents wants their children to study. Why we have to study? What is the purpose of studying? I think the answer must be having a good job. So, what's the purpose of having good job? The answer is earning more money, so that he can enjoy all the worldly pleasures and he can buy whatever he wish to.
Finally, money can do anything in the present world. For example, if one want to take care of oneself and his family he needs money. If a person want to achieve his dreams he needs money. What not money is everything in the present world.Without money most of the people may not be able to survive in this competitive world. Money also provides means of helping other people in need. If a person had enough money and wonderful life, he could also use the money for helping others and make them to achieve their dreams,goals and he can use money to build a better environment.
All in all, I would like to support the idea that the money earned from job is the most important factor for many by the above mentioned reasons and examples.
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Sentence: If a person want to achieve his dreams he needs money.
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