Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

To achieve harmony between family and work is of crucial importance to the working class. No matter what position they are, such lawyer, teacher or engineer, after they came back home, they are just ordinary people. And some people believe that a good job with high salary have more attractiveness than the family and friends. However, from my point of view, I disagree with the statement. Having frequent communication with close friends and family is a basic need which is imbedded in human mind. The following paragraph will aptly elucidate my viewpoint.
To begin with, in modern society, people have heavy pressure that they are bond with the high-speed rolling wheel of technology development. The interaction with family and friends provides cheeriness for worker with heavy pressure, such as financial burden or others. For example, my uncle was used to work as a programmer in a big company which require its employee exercise the newest technology in their work. Thus, he has to update his knowledge as soon as the new technology came up, that is to say, he works with pressure every day. During this procedure, he was strong supported by his family and friends through many activities, such as sharing the difficulties with friends or playing with his cute sons. Those interaction eases his pain of heavy pressure and let him back to work with an energetic body. In basic, if he had not spent time with his family or friends, he might not passed this period smoothly.
Furthermore, the pleasure at home is never contradictory to the passion shown to one's work. Just as the old saying goes, "East and west, home is the best," when trapped in dilemmas at work, one may turn to the family for help. For example, when my older brother was fresh in his work and not familiar with the job market, he figured out that no one else can be more supportive than family. He discussed the challenges with his family to search for assistance and restore courage. Just like the best cure to a disease, loved ones are the most trustworthy and honest advisers. After having a face-to-face chat with the family members, he was immediately becoming totally refreshed. There is no way around the fact that the harmonious relationship at home helps keep people in a good mood during office hours, which can in turn improve working efficiency.
As a result of aforementioned reasons and examples, it is crystal clear that people stay with their family and friend could create many fascinating records and it also can benefit human to ease the burden of outside world.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88558352403 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61937074714 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558352402746 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7055867929 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8095238095 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104969456035 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037187061448 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309942529587 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677800746422 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222136567998 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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