Without any shadow of doubts, having interaction with others in society one of the prominent needs and trends which are embedded in human's mind. From my point of view, i agree with the statement that students work together is more effectively than they work alone. The following paragraphs will aptly elucidate my point with two conspicuous reasons.
To begin with, students have to learn more knowledge than before with high speed development of technology and science. In this environment, people have more difficulty to learn everything by himself, which is a low efficient learning method.So, it is essential for students to learn knowledge in a group which allows them exchange their ideas and thinking. For example, my math teacher, in my university, divided our class into groups ,and he assign a learning task for every group which is a hard part in math. There a so many definitions and theories in this part that we have to focus on each one by each person. And after someone finished his part, there will be a study meeting , in which, the student will teach others about his part. Finally, we pass the exam because of this high efficient study method. In brief, working together is a ability which students needs to have in a high speed developing society.
Next, there are many tasks have to be done by groups of people instead of work alone, because everyone has its weakness which others may is good at it. Nowadays, projects became more complex , that is to say, it require more people who must have the team working ability. For instance, i have to work with others in a website developing task, because i only learn about the knowledge of server, but there are still web engine and web pages need to be deal with. Thus, it have to takes several people to handle this problem. In general, having ability of working with others is vital to students in society.
To sum up, as consequence of aforementioned reasons and examples, it is crystal clear that the high speed rolling wheel of society life urge us to learn the ability that communicate with others in team work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in brief, in general, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7817679558 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49558691523 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9177354953 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25883402888 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941688325415 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790201359898 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162930259861 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478134315933 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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