Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The existence of sporting and social activities at universities and colleges has long attracted much social concern. Many people propose that those after-school activities should be provided as much financial support as classes and libraries. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with that proposal due to the great benefits to both students and schools.
In the first place, what I put on my priority is that sports and social activities significantly simulate students’ comprehensive development. It cannot be denied that sports and arts do wonders for our physical and mental health. A...
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