Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is a challenge. We often have to face unpleasant situations and live disagreeable experiences in order to complete it. Nevertheless, we always try to make our existence more enjoyable. Although everybody likes to live a pleasant life, in my view, young people are more able to do so since they have fewer responsibilities and more opportunities and they are more impressionable.
Young people, unlike adults, have fewer responsibilities, so they can spend more time satisfying their own needs. Their main priority is to fulfill their dreams. For example, a child spends all day doing the thing...
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