Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important things that people learn in their lives are not learned in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The most important things that people learn in their lives are not learned in school.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I ever heard quote "learning from experience is the best way". In other word, I say that we can learn from anything such as book, experience, and mistake. In simply I want to tell that learning by yourself experience is great choice. Hence, I agree when people say we can learn whenever we are, not just in school.

Human created by God to becomes social-interaction-person which means we should have socialization. It occurs around our circumstances like school, home, office, and so on. For example, as student I always go to school six-day in one week and 8-hour a day. It means I have 10-hour to interact in other place like neighboor. I just learn how to solve math or physic problem when I am at school. Because I think school just give me academic-view, not about life-cycle. Teachers just teach subject and discuss also share about it. They are not speak about my daily activity because I know that is not their business.

I have many experience when I talk with my friend and also my family-member. I also collect many experience when I talk with my neighboor. I know what is hot-issue outside there, share how many problem I have with them, and do fun-activity in my free-time. Also, I learn from their mistake and try to not do same thing.

I also read motivation-book and another books like novel based on true story. I like reading the real-life from another people. They give more inspiration about life and how to handle, control, and solve each problem. I learn many problems like violence, abuse child, spanking, and love-life. So, If I see problem like that, I will know how should I do and never make other people like mom worry about me.

In conclusion, I say that school is not best place to gain my experience. It all about learn academically. Learning experience comes from book, people's life and mistake.

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